Nice melodies dude =]

I gotta say I like it. =]

Bad: Too repetitive maybe? When all the guitars are together the sound sounds drowned.

Good: Nice interesting riffs and use of delay, and interesting use of the kick drum to give the sense of mah old heart racing.

Hehe Good work!
8/10!

Takes me back to the 60/'s, even though I'm 17....

First off, I gotta say I love the sound quality! Gives it that real 60's live feel. As for the song, nice lyrics, I love how the whole song isnt DUNDUNDUN (heavy strumming).

The vocals arent PERFECT but with the whole feel of the song they go well.
So yeah nice stuff. I hope this guy plays live at local acoustic clubs or open mics as Im sure he would go down well if he did =]
So yah
8/10

I can see it in a game.

So its a loop, and one I could see in a game. Of course its not the most amazing loop ever or the most inspiring sound I've ever heard but for the context of a battle I think It would be suitable, if perhaps to repetitive.

Thoughts: Maybe double the length by adding say it pitchshifted every 3 repeats a few semitones higher so its a different chord.

As a piece of music 4/10
As a loop for a battle 7/10

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